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*sigh* :)

This is an image that has been in my head since I was a child (about 12 or so). I never gave it words until now. Wow, nearly ten years later, and all it took was the right music, and it all came back to me.

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:icontheeclipse:
Nice. It's such a short event, but with the way you write it, it seems to play out in slow motion and comes off as kinda epic.

"My hair streams behind me wildly, like a black flag."

:love:

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:blush: Thanks ^^ I'm pretty proud of how it's turned out. I sort of wrote it without thinking about it, and the simplicity seemed to work well. ^_^

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I find music the best inspiration!

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:iconbellaezrebetfang:
*sigh* my escape is quite like this as well. Beautiful imagery. Definitely and uber-escape plan. :D

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:iconshadowsonwater:
I know, isn't it wonderful! And there's so much music out there to tap into :D

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:iconlatenightlady:
This is lovely, very serene and relaxing. I think you could really make it great by a bit more detail of the environment as you run or perhaps the thoughts of the runner. It takes it otu of the simplistic and into reality where the reader can actually see what you see as you run.

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Ah.. gave me inspiration to write something that's been in my mind for the last 8 years.. let's hope I like it enough to post it.

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I hope you do post it, I'd love to read it! :D

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:iconshadowsonwater:
Thankyou! :D Yeah, I'm going to include a variation on this scene in a story I have in planning which will be more extended. Should be fun to write :D

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